Haggard's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Generic Sprite Flash: 2]

Generic again. :P

Again generic, as the title indicates, but better than the first one. More action, less talking. Also the implementation of subtitles was a good idea. It's easier to read and it doesn't cover up parts of the screen.

The Golden Axe reference was pretty nice. :)

I noticed one minor flaw though: One time you wrote "your" when "you're/you are" would've been correct. It's an annoying error that could easily be avoided if you just say "you are" out loud every time you want to write "your". If it doesn't make sense, then "your" is correct, if it does, then you should write "you're". ;)

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Fro responds:

Your right. lolololololol

Ha, yeah this will be fixed in the next episode.. as I will be using voices instead. Can't be bothered to go back and fix it now though.

[Generic Sprite Flash: 1]

Generic

Yep, it's pretty generic. Nothing too new in the first episode, but the opponent that was too slow to catch Link was funny. Also, the cliffhanger is done very nicely.

The choice of music is good (you can't do anything wrong with one of sonofkirks submissions), but I would have preferred if you would have only chosen 8 bit music. It just adds more to the atmosphere if the whole presentation is in 8 bit.

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Fro responds:

Thanks. I'm having an audio pro do my music next time for me. I know little about music sadly.

[TaL: The Snowball Effect]

Great

Yeah, great flash as always. Tywo At Large slowly becomes my favorite series here on Newgrounds, I just love your work. :)

Nice April Fools at the end with that tape recorder message.

Pixmintro responds:

Thanks, I'll keep cranking them out! :)

[The War - My 1st Flash...]

Needs more work

Well, the basics are there. The coloring of the flash is pretty good, the sound effects are good as well.

But the animations are pretty rough and don't look very good at all. Maybe a higher frame rate would do the trick here.

Also, the graphics don't look good either. The only thing you can do here is to practice. Also, don't be afraid to erase things if you aren't 100% satisfied with them and redraw it. Even if it takes 20 or more tries to get a line right, it really shows in the end.

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Rabjab responds:

Yes I was 100% satisfied at the time because I was a noob...

[Snow Wars Introduction]

Funny

Well, the trailer is very promising. The acting here is very good. You guys sound and look like you would be doing this every day.

Too bad the quality of the picture is so low, but I guess if it was a higher quality then you would have problems with the file size limit.
It's a good thing that you also have a higher quality version on youtube.

Like sonofkirk stated, the text moves around too much. It's ok that it is "animated" as this is a bit more interesting than if it would just sit there. But this was too much. Also, some of the text couldn't be seen as it was off screen (for example the line "the highly aniticipated" was cut off at the end).

Also, the picture and the sound where slightly off during the middle of the trailer.

Anyway, this trailer looks very promising and I hope to see the full "snow wars" soon!

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Fro responds:

The funny thing about putting video in flash, unless you are allowed to have a file size that's like 15 MB, the sound just doesn't line up no matter how hard you try.

The text in the beginning was my fault. :( It's my noobnest with flash.

You won't be seeing the full snow wars soon if every though. :(

Thanks for the review.

[Kiaras Naruto Flash (Ger)]

Lip syncing is very nice

The lip syncing is done very nice. Voices and the movement of the mouthes fit pretty well together.

However, the plain white background looks a bit boring. A bit more work on that aspect would make the flash much better.

Also those little scenes in between where characters where flying around with balloons were a bit... strange.

Also also not many people on newgrounds can understand german. If you want higher ratings for your flash you should write the description in english and also add subtitles, so that people who can't understand german can at least read what's going on here.

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[Once When I Was A Kid SE]

Good

This is a very funny flash. The punch line just made me laugh.
The graphics are very nice here and I like how you used photos for backgrounds in the flash back, even though it looked a bit strange when you zoomed out as the characters where moving a bit on the ground (ie they where not standing in the same place after the zoom).

The voice acting is done great, but there are some statics every now and then. A slightly higher sound quality would be pretty neat. :)

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tacobuttfish responds:

Hey glad you liked it! More coming soon!

-Taco Buttfish.

[Warthog flash project]

Needs more work

A nice little flash, but the sprites need some more work. For example, the blue guy didn't move his legs while walking towards the Warthog and the white guy didn't move at all while throwing the bomb/landmine.

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Hybrid-Of-Souls responds:

I wish I could get to moving the legs properly, but that would've been a little too much at once, given my time.
Thanks for liking though.

[Join The Red Bull Collab!]

Nice advertisement

Short and precise, just how a commercial should be. The graphics are very good and I especially liked the smoke. It was drawn in a very realistc way.

Looking forward to the finished collab!

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Vincoid responds:

Thanks man, appreciate the review ;D

[MSLand C3E2]

Good

Again a pretty nice flash. I like how the story continues right where the first part ended. The graphics are better in this one as the background look much more detailed this time.
The animations could still use some work (especially when the guy was walking to the sofa) but I liked the facial expressions of the news reporter.

However, there a still some sound effects missing here. It would be nice to hear some hammering when the guy bars the door shut.

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Grimasen responds:

Hi, thanks.