Done quickly, and it shows
First of all let me say that this isn't a bad idea. You have a point there. When famous people die, other people tend to pay "tribute" to them with crappy submissions that are nothing else as slideshows with a sad tune playing in the background.
Also, the beginning with June/July and Michael Jordan, Michael Phelps (or however it is spelled ^^) and Michael Jackson was funny, too.
However, it really shows that this flash was done very quickly. The voice is sometimes a bit too muffled and it's kinda hard to understand what you are saying. The graphics are pretty sloppy and the images aren't always well placed.
I'm sure you can do a lot better than this if you put more effort into your flashes plus if you have the time to plan your flash better. But on the other if you put this out in like a month, no one would care about your point anymore, because all those tributes would've been long gone from the front page of the portal and people simply wouldn't care anymore.
So, this is an okay flash if you consider the fact that you simply hadn't that much time to put this together, the point you have isn't less valid just because the flash doesn't have first class graphics. ;)
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