Too fast
Can't say much about this flash as it went by in a flash (pun intended). Turn down the FPS or make use of a "next" button, so we could actually read the text and see what's going on there.
Or strech out the scenes on more frames and not just one.
From what I could make out, the graphics are below average (just sticks, no backgrounds) and animtations aren't good either. Try to work on your drawing skills because stick men are overused and you need to come up with an awesome stick movie if you want to impress people with it.
Also work on your animation skills. Tweens should only be used very carefully, it just looks unnatural if peoples arms and bodys tween around the screen.
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