Good start
The drums in the intro sound pretty strange, as if I was listening to them standing outside a large hall while the drums are played inside the hall. Maybe take away some of the reverb there.
After the intro the kick gets a lot better and I like the melodies you created here. They sound very catchy and I think you could use those as some kind of leitmotif in the finished song.
Later on, at around 1:18 the song gets very messy with all the stuff going on there at once. Maybe if the song developed longer until it becomes this "messy" it would sound better, but right now it just happens too quickly.
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