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[Xyirx - Dragon's Burden]

Great song

A very good and very relaxing, yet somewhat melancholic song. I think you've just found the right mood for this song. A dragon thinks about the past, well it's very easy to get a bit melancholic if you do that, so it's just right for this song.

I like the composition very much. I just listened to this song a few times in a row. I completly forgot I loaded this song, while I was browsing on a different page, heh. This only happens if I like the music, my brain kind of "blends out" the music, so I listen to the music, without really listening to it (if that makes any sense at all... >_>). If I don't like the music I'm always like: "Ghaa, this sh*t is annoying, turn it off!"
So, it's not a bad thing for me I "forgot" that I was listening to this song. ^^

Anyway, I like that this song stays so calm the whole time. Again, this fits great to the little story you wrote up in the comments section. A faster pace wouldn't have the same feeling here.
But "calm" doesn't equal "boring", the song is quite intense, even though it loses a bit of it's intenseness (is that a word?) once the piano sets in at 1:49. I guess this is the part where the dragon learns to accept his true identity.

The only thing I didn't like was the chimes at 0:52, as they seem to be a bit overused in those kind of songs.

Anway, this song is going straight to my favs! :)

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Xyirx responds:

Thank you so much....so, so much for your detailed review. I appreciate for pointing out some things that could be improved or changed. I'll certainly consider these things in the upcoming tracks. Thank you again for the favorite and wholehearted support. :)

Xyirx

[EpicMetalInstrumental(Jeffaro)]

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It's hard to write good instrumentals as they tend to get a bit repetitive, but this is one of the good instrumentals.

I like the diversity very much here. Okay, the song is only about two and a half minutes long, but it's still very nice that you put so many different parts into it. And the best of all: The parts all go along very well together. There's not a single part where I thought: "Now the flow of the song is lost."

The very first part (and one or two parts after the intro) remind me a lot of Metallica. Maybe because I was listening to Metallica just moments before I loaded up this song, heh.

Aynway, very nice work man, keep it up!

Jeffaro responds:

The intro was inspired by metallica actually. The harmony part in leper messiah to be exact. After the intro harmony deal I take inspiration from megadeth. Then I go on to take inspiration from Iced Earth once the galloping starts.

[Key to the City]

Relaxing

A very relaxing song, I really like that. I think the atmosphere is pretty nice here. Reminds me a bit of lazy sundays, or even lazy saturdays, sitting in a street cafe. :)

However, I also think there isn't happening too much in the song. Yes, songs in the ambient genre tend to not developing too much, but I listened to this song about 4 times now and I always feel that there is something missing.
The worst thing about this is that can't tell you exactly what it is that I think is missing here, so I was hesitant to even write this review.
But well, I think some more sound effects would be really nice to have. I know there are a few sound effects in this song, but they are very quiet and barely noticeable.

Maybe you could add some street noises - passing cars, or people talking - or even some café/restaurant noises (forks and spoons clanking on plates and cups).
But on the other hand if you add too many noises you can easily ruin this song, so you'd have to be VERY careful if you follow this advice.

Overall the song is very nice, as it creates a good atmosphere and the flow of the song is pretty good as well.

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Sawdust responds:

Thanks about that! I'll take that advice to heart.

[-Fuck Me-]

Good song

When I read the genre "Grunge" I was hoping for some distorted guitars, so I was a little disappointed at first when I realized the song would be without distortion all the way through. But only a little. Because the song works really great the way it is now.

The deep vocals go along very well with the accoustic guitars (which play some very nice riffs, btw) and the percussions add a very special note to this song. They are only in the background so that I sometimes wondered if this song makes use of any percussions at all. I really like that, because when I noticed the percussions again I realized I was hearing them all the time. This is a very strange feeling to realize you where hearing something the whole time, but only "subconsciously".

Also this piece shows that "angry songs" don't have to make use of loud drums and even louder, distorted guitars. The atmosphere you manage to create with your "minimalistic" setup is very tense and yes, very angry. Just not the kind of "screaming out loud angry".

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ShanZE responds:

If you're going to review the other two songs I requested, you'll hear the distortion too :D Actually this is one of the two tracks on the album that are acoustic, the rest is plugged-in crunchy stuff.

Thanks for the compliments on the riffs! Lately I've been having this paranoia that I've heard the main riff somewhere but I guess it doesn't matter since everything's been done before, at least once. Awesome that you liked the percussion, that's actually me playing bongos or whaddyacallthem, the rest of the album is done with a drum machine. In the first mix the bongos were overpowering when listening with headphones, this mix I think is pretty well balanced.

What you say about "angry songs" is something I've been trying to keep in mind throughout recording the album. At times I really wanted to make the guitars louder but in the end I decided to go for balance and tried to make the vocals stand out more. Everything went hell of a lot better than with my last album (or EP, to be specific), and this song is among the best on the album when it comes to production quality. I'm glad you liked the way I presented this song, it never even crossed my mind to go electric on this one, it was acoustic from the start.

But the album also contains some more traditional angry songs with distorted guitars and from-the-top-of-my-lungs-screaming, I hope you'll like them too! If you'll listen to them, that is :D

Thanks for the awesome review and for the 10!!

[.:Motivated Suspicions:.(WIP)]

Good song

A really funky song. Well, that's why it's listed in the "Funk" genre, right?

I think it could use some more bass. It all sounds a bit flat right now. Maybe it's because you used a MIDI converter, I'm not sure. But I think with more bass it would sound a lot better.

The intro is done very nice. It get's "straight to the point", no long winded fade ins or anything fancy like that. It's a bit unusal at first, but after about 10 seconds into the song I think the intro is perfect for this song.

The part after the intro with the trumpets (? or is it just a keyboard?) is a nice touch. The other instruments carry on the song and the melodies from the intro and the trumpets add a very special note to the song. But I think they could be mixed even more into the foreground, they have a hard time competing against the other instruments.

About 01:07 to 01:27: At first I thought that nothing special happens here, but after listening to this part more closely I noticed the small variations during this part.

The trumpet sets in again and it plays another nice melody. I like that you use this instrument again after the small pause. It adds some kind of "dynamic" to the song (well, it's hard to explain, but I like it when an instrument has some parts in the song where it doesn't play and then it sets in again in a different part).

Now to the part around the 2-minute-mark: To be honest, I don't like it that much. Maybe it's because the drums sound too artificial for me, but it all sounds a bit unorganized here. Just as if you suddendly lost concentration and just threw together something really quickly without paying too much attention to the beat. I'm not saying you did that, but that's what it sounds like to me.

The outro: I REALLY like the change in tempo here. It may not be the most subtle change, but it really works in this song and it's a very nice ending.

You also asked for comments on the song structure. Well, this isn't exactly my strong point as I'm not much of a musician myself (I can play the guitar, but all I do is playing already existing songs, not any stuff of my own). But I like the structure here. The way you composed this song is quite nice, there's always something happening in this song. Be it just subtle variations like from 1:07 to 1:27 or the fact that the trumpets have some parts during the song where they don't play at all and then they set in again. It's very nice to listen to all those changes and it makes the song really interesting.

Well, I hope this review was helpful to you and I wish you luck with whatever it is you need this song for in two weeks. :)

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camoshark responds:

Wow, thanks mate, I appreciate the quick response and the massive review!

-Of course it needs more bass, thought it's more about the depth that's lacking rather than a lack of power, and there's ways to arrange that, so it's not that much of a big deal.

-I like straight-to-the-point intros :)

-As for the brass you're hearing, it's actually a trumpet, trombone, alto, tenor and baritone saxophones.

-The part where the "trumpet" comes back is actually an alto solo, thought it may be hard to tell. the next part is actually a drum solo, thought it will SYSTEMATICALY sound like crap however you put it.

And finally the intro. Every time I let someone hear it, I tell them to stay till the end if they don't want to miss out the best part of the song :3.

Once again, thank you very much for the quick response, I didn't think anybody would read this or consider it, but you've prooved me wrong!

Cheers,
Samuel Hébert

[{B.A.B.} Bagattella di Estate]

Good atmosphere

This song creates a very good atmosphere and I think it can be used in many different scenarios. Either the one SCTE3 suggested in his review (the child's movie) or maybe in a movie with pirates, or even a documentation about the Yellowstone Park. As I've said, I think this can be used in many different scenarios.

I like the composition very much and I like the instruments you used. Every instrument has a clear purpose. Some are very much in the front, acting as "lead instruments", others can be heard in the background. But every instrument can be clearly heard, which is a very good thing. Sometimes instruments are drowned out by other, much more powerful instruments. But here even the quite tingle of the chimes can be heard.

Good work!

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blackattackbitch responds:

Hmm, never considered it in a pirate movie before, but it does have that kind of structure. I'm glad you think its versatile, especially since my only goal in this composition was to capture pure joy and happiness.

I had put a lot of effort into mixing this song as well as I could, and one of the main drivers for this song is for each instrument and melody to play an essential part. So I'm glad I managed to capture that.

Thanks for the review, I'm extremely glad you and the other guys liked it.

[Eve of the War]

Good voice

You have a very nice reading voice and this time you also took the time to pronounce the words very clearly. This extra effort really pays off. You managed to create a very good atmosphere with your voice alone. Even though I know the story, I sat before my laptop, listening to your story telling.

However, just lke SeeD pointed out, there are a few noticeable pauses. I guess this is because you recorded this story in parts, which is only natural. It makes it alot easier to correct mistakes (nothing more annoying if you have a slip of tounge on the last few words and have to record huge parts again because there's no way of editing it in a satisfying way).
But the few seconds where we can hear nothing, not even the surrounding sounds, destroy the flow of the story.

Anyway, back to the voice acting. I think you just found the right pace to read this story. Slowly, but very fluently, without any unnecessary pauses (except for the pauses mentioned in the paragraph above) and even though you read this long text very quietly, it never gets boring to listen to your reading.

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Coop responds:

Perhaps if I made the pauses slightly shorter, it would sound better. I'm glad that you enjoyed the piece - there's hope for me yet :D

[Brothas & Sistas!]

Great bass, vocals get very repetitive

Wow, very intense drums here. The deep bass is really amazing and the glitched drum parts fit very well to it.

The vocals destroy the song a bit, imo. On the one hand it's nice to have some vocal samples in a song, but here it doesn't fit too well. Also, after about one minute, the "this is our government" gets really old. Later on the song you mess around with the vocals up to the point where it gets really annoying.
I think you should cut down on the samples a bit and concentrate on the amazing drums more instead.

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Dj-GST responds:

Thanks.

The vocals say "Brothas & Sistas", which is why the track is named as such. I'll turn them down a bit, and vocode them, but I'm not gonna cut them down.

Thanks for the review.

-GST-

[Fat Joker-Redux]

Funny

Oh yes, I remember the original l version and even left a review for it some time ago,

I think the redux version with the added music is a lot better. I don't want to say the original was bad, I just like this version better.
The music adds some nice dramatic atmosphere to this piece that was somehow missing in the first version you uploaded.

Also, the text is still funny. "Why so hungry, son?"

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ForNoReason responds:

Ill keep working on it! Thanks for the advice

[.:Dixieland Reborn:.]

Nice song

This song is pretty cool, it made me snap my fingers along to the beat. The song also creates a very happy atmosphere. It put me in a good mood.

The ending is a bit cut off, though. Propably an error that occured during the uploading process, but it still prevents me from giving this song a 10. :(

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camoshark responds:

Thanks for the review!

I know, you're the first person to notice! It's actually a lag that occures during the conversion each time I use the converter I used.

Glad you enjoyed the song!

Cheers,
Samuel Hébert