Good
I like that you put in a little "story" into your voice acting, this makes this submission more interesting to listen to.
Some of the voices sound like you are trying a bit too hard (for example that one at 0:16 and the one after that), but there are voices that are just awesome, like the one at 0:34 (I like that one especially because you put some emotions in there).
Overall, this is a very good advertising and I hope to hear your work in future flash submissions.
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