Haggard's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Swerve - Rip]

Very simple

A very simple beat and a simple melody. Too bad there's not that much diversity in here, the intro sounds very promising.

I think this song needs some breaks here and there, to get away from the main beat which is annoying after one has to listen to it for a few minutes.
Also, some more melodies that get stuck in the head would be nice to have. Also, the meldoies should be a bit louder than the beat. Right now the main beat is the sound that is most present here. Another thing that makes this song boring after a while.

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[In vitro Space Jesus]

That's not my cup of tea

This is very hard to review for me as I'm not into noise.

However, this creates a very creepy atmosphere, kinda like I am dragged into a paralell universe where pain, hate and violence are the only emotions left in the world.

A very destructive sound in my opinion, but I can't listen to this for too long. That scratching noise hurts my ears after a while.

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[Rondoesque]

Good

Midi sounds awful, but I guess you know that already. I would really like to hear this with a real saxophone. The melody is nice and pretty catchy. This all is backed up with a nice piano in the background.

Good work on composing, now you just need to find a way to record a real sax. ;)

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sarias responds:

oh it will happen when i have the tools to do so I have a sax player (i could do it but I was 3rd chair in regionals and he was 1st and 2nd in all state i didn't make it lol) to play it for me now i just need to find a piano player because to be honest im an ok pianist but this is a little beyond me

thanks again for the review

[The Terminator (Revamped)]

Nice intro, but it's too long

I like the piano intro, but it goes on for too long. Seeing as this is labeled as "Heavy Metal" you may want to cut down the intro a bit. If I read "Heavy Metal" I expect guitars and drums, not a piano. ;)

Anyway, when the guitars finally set in after 2 minutes they sound a bit overpowered. They nearly outpower the drums, which is a pity.

The atmosphere you create with the guitars is nice, so you just have to work a bit on the mixing here.

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Blackdoom13 responds:

Ok thanks for the review. I'm gonna cut up the intro later and remix the other instruments.

[Ecliptic]

Nice

It's pretty nice and I actually felt reminded of some C&C tracks even though I never played that game for too long. But your track has the same futuristic feeling to it.

I think that one sound from the intro (that one that starts right away when the song starts) is a bit too loud and it goes on for too long. It was hard to make out the other instruments when that sound was playing. Only after over 1 minute you break it up a bit.

But overall it's a good song.

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EvilScorpio responds:

Thanks for your review))

[The Voice Actor's Creed]

Good

I like that you put in a little "story" into your voice acting, this makes this submission more interesting to listen to.

Some of the voices sound like you are trying a bit too hard (for example that one at 0:16 and the one after that), but there are voices that are just awesome, like the one at 0:34 (I like that one especially because you put some emotions in there).

Overall, this is a very good advertising and I hope to hear your work in future flash submissions.

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[Galuminum]

Not enough Heavy Metal

I like 8-bit tunes.
I like Heavy Metal.

So this song is a pure win for me. But I like Heavy Metal more than 8-bit and this is filed under Heavy Metal. So I agree with some of the other reviewers who said that there should be more Metal in it.

The tune itself is very nice and I like the melodies and beats you created. I liked the second part (at 1:10) better, because the contrast of the heavy guitar and the kinda lightweight sounding 8-bit tunes is very interesting.

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loansindi responds:

Thank you for the review.

I also am a fan of the second part, and when I get around to visiting this style again, that's the approach I'm going to take. Eventually the guitar will also take solos, they just need to be written.

[Big Red - Oh Noez!]

That was fast...

Good that you put the lyrics in the comments or else I wouldn't have understood a thing here.

The background beat could use some more melodies. Right now it seems as if it is just there so that you have something in the background, which is a bit of a let down for the song.

The rapping was nice and even though you rapped very fast all the words have been pronounced pretty clear, so... good job there. :)

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BigRed responds:

Better speakers!! There's a baseline in there that I love! haha! Thanks for the review though!