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[Come on lets Go!]

Nice, but needs some "polishing"

I really like the drums here. They are very powerful and offer a very nice beat.
The guitars sound nice as well, the riff is very heavy and fits nicely to the drum beat.

Only problem is that everything here sounds so "loud". Sometimes the guitars are nearly drowned by the drums and sometimes the drums can hardly be heared. So this track needs a bit more equalizing to improve the overall sound quality of this submission.

sicjes responds:

Thanks for the feedback, really. I know where I am weak and will only improve with every new effort. I'm about to take a 4 month vacation to really practice and work on my music and other creative projects. Thanks again for your time

[mik // the beach \\]

Hm...

The wave crashes actually sound pretty good here, so you can get the feeling to lay at a beach. Also the melody itself is nice and happy, so some sort of "vacation feeling" definitely is in this song. I don't know if you where aming for this sort of atmosphere, but it is there. ^^

However, maybe you should change the instrument that plays the melody, or change the pitch a bit. This high pitched tune really hurts in the ears after some time.

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[Final Days]

Nice song, but bad sound quality

As Fro stated, the sound quality really lets this song down. The song itself is pretty good, the drums are very nice, especially the "double bass drum" parts are amazing.

Also what this song really needs are some vocals. It seems as if the slower and quieter parts of this song just wait for the singer to start singing...
I could imagine some sort of "Opeth"-like vocals here, as the double bass parts really remind me of their song "Deliverance"

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[[LY] Afternoon Blazing [D]]

Relaxing

You have some very nice melodies in this song and it's pretty groovy, especially that melody that can be heard at 1:13.

Also, the song is really relaxing. I closed my eyes and listened to this a few times in a row, because it really helped me to relief my stress after a pretty tough day. :)

But I think there should be a few more elements in the song to make it a bit more interesting. Maybe some voice samples would be great. Just a male voice that says some random things would already do the trick.

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la-yinn responds:

Haha, glad I could help you relief your stresses. :D

Some more effects and such would help, but I'm currently really working on some saxophone/trumpet melodies. Already have it planned out to give it a bit more of a jazzy feeling.

I've thought about vocals too, but I'm not to sure if it would work. I was going to try it out, but my microphones out of order at the moment so I guess I'll leave it out.

Thanks for the review!

[itookachillpill]

Simple but great

A very simple track. One guitar and that's it. It's kinda hard to keep the listener interested in your track if you only make use of one single instrument. But you did an amazing job here.
The melody is very relaxing and especially the high notes make me... well, "happy". At least I listened to this track a few times in a row just because I wanted to hear the bits with the high notes again.

Would be great if some skilled singer would put vocals on this track, as I think it would sound even better with vocals. :)

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loansindi responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

This piece has been kicking around in my brain for a long time, and I think there's a reason for that.

I really want to nail down a 'proper' version of this song and get some vocals on it. I think that'd make it badass.

[~-Chrono Trigger-~]

A game I have yet to play

That's right, never played Chrono Trigger. But it's kinda hard to do so, because the game was never released in Europe (except for the DS-Version, but I don't own a DS).

Anyway, this is a very nice song. Sounds like something from the intro or it is a song after something bad had happened in the story line. The overall feeling of the song is kinda sad, even though it has it's happy moments where hope shines through...

I like the outro of the song. Ending on that note sounded a bit strange at first, but when I listened to it again it sounds pretty fitting there.

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Cosmos8942 responds:

Was Chrono Cross released in Europe? That has many of the same tunes in it just with a more modernized feel overall. (seriously, that game is almost worth buying a DS just to play it o_o)

But I can't take all the credit, the original, in my opinion, is still better. But that could be simply because it was in the game when I heard it and well, you know...that sorta added to the feeling. Hope? BALDERDASH! Well, maybe not but thats an interesting way to put it.

On the outro I actually couldn't think of anything at the time so I replayed it a few times over and eventually came up with what I thought wasn't the greatest ending to any song. That is until I realized that it was, perhaps, a near-perfect ending for the piece. Like you said, doesn't feel like it fits but it grows on ya'.

-Tony-

Woo, lots o' reviews to catch up on, what can I say my internet was down for a bit there so catching up is a must.

[Dr. M Fever]

Nice one

Never played the game, so I have no idea how the original version of this song sounds. But already in the intro I had the feeling that it most be a song for some Mario game, heh.

Rhythm and melodies are very nice in this track and the overall groove of the song is just amazing. But I think would have liked this a bit better if this wouldn't sound like a Midi, nostalgia or not. :P

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Cosmos8942 responds:

Geez you people, sit down, shut up, AND PLAY THE DAMN GAME!!1! Its quite good :3. Haha, you already figured it was for a Mario game? What good ears you have young one :). But seriously, it is an addicting game, consider it Tetris with a twist...and without the super fanatic fan drama.

But since this was originally an 8-bit song (NES anyone?) I should say that though it does sound a bit like a MIDI just imagine if I sat down and said to myself..."You know, I think I will make this sound EXACTLY like the original, just with more flavor [see below for the recipe :o)." I think we would have a incredible NES song up here instead of one that actually sounds better overall. I might go back and remake this one using an orchestra and [perhaps] choir with Brass elements but it is hard to say right now. Frankly though, my biggest excuse is that I like to (when I remix something for the first time) stick to the original feeling the piece had. That is my philosophy, remix something all that you like but keep something of the original feeling intact. The easiest way to do this is make it sound like the original. It is a fine line, but I think I find that line quite often ^^.

-Tony-

Thanks for the review once again 'Review Request Club" and you 'Haggard'. Its appreciated that you guys (and girls) take the time to go through these. But I have to say, I'm always worried about a low score...call me paranoid XD.

[[S:C] Avoider 2.0]

Nice, but doesn't loop too well

The rhythm here is very nice. It's amazing what you created here even though the song is not even a minute long.
I found myself instantly moving to the music, which is always a good sign, heh.

Too bad this doesn't loop too well. The change over from the end to the beginning of the song is just too noticeable.

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SymbolCymbal responds:

yeah i wasn't even paying much attention to the ending and beginning and how it would mesh. Its funny whenever your making a loop like this, after a while it sounds fine. But to listen to it for the first time anyone can completely hear that it doesn't loop well.
Im glad it got you moving though.

Thank you very much for the review

[[dj-Jo] Conundrum {AP}]

Generic sounds, but good song

The intro doesn't sound that good. Much too generic sounds that you used there. So I was positively surprised when the song went on what you created with those generic sounds.

You have some very nice melodies in here and the background beat is nice as well. Also, the build up of the song is done in a very good way. It starts off with only the drum beat, then slowly more and more things are added until the "full" song can be heard. Too bad that the song ends so abrupt. At first I thought the song had stopped playing for some strange reasong, but then I heard the intro again... so yeah, the song should be a bit longer and you have to work on the outro.
Maybe taking away the instruments slowly (kind of an "reversed intro") could work here.

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[First Musings - v2]

Very relaxing

As others have already stated, this is indeed very relaxing. Just the kind of song I needed right now. I'm a bit ill (a cold again) and have just been a little upset over silly things. That isn't exactly what I need to get rid of my cold, so a little relaxing stuff to sip my tea to is much better for my health. ^^

I like the intro of this song. The deep and short tones set a pretty nice atmosphere already. When then the higher instruments set in it all sounds very nice and indeed a bit comical, as Oyajitchi-sama has stated in his review.

Too bad the song is so short, but as this is work in progress I guess you will add more to this later.

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loansindi responds:

Thanks for the review. I do hope to work on the length of this piece.