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Well well, I'm glad I reviewed the submissions in the order I did, because now I can see a very nice learning curve. The first flash was pretty rough, the second was a bit better and this is again better than the second one.
Most of the scenes here have a pretty good drawing style. There's still room for improvement (for example you should try to make the outer lines of the characters a bit thinner), but compared to the first music video you improved quite a lot already.
You should also try to work a bit on the lip syncing, because it didn't look that good, especially on the scene where the cowboy holds up the stone while singing "we will rock you".
I'm not really sure what I should think of the different styles in this video. The madness scenes fit quite well into the flash, but on the other hand it looks a bit like this video was thrown together really quickly and you simply took scenes from other flashes you are working on.
But on the other hand again it shows that you are able to work with and draw in different styles, which is a good thing, as it broadens your horizon as an artist. :)
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