Haggard's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The RRC Awards]

Nice

A good flash, with some very nice scenes. I especially liked Coop as an "overdressed" english gentleman. ^^
Too bad the audio was so much out of sync in his part.

I liked the links to the nominations in the videos, this should give the artists some more exposure.

Sometimes the popups stating which category the following video is about was gone too fast. Maybe a title screen would have worked better here.

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Fro responds:

I think a scene selection will help as well in the future

[Rama Lama]

Random

The song is nice, the animations are very random and quite rough sometimes.

The drawing style is also very sloppy and the quality of the drawings a very different each picture. At one time we see some pretty good drawn angel-like characters, the next scene is two very badly drawn stick figures moving around in front of a flashing background.

You should try to put only drawings in this piece that offer the same quality, or else it looks just too weird.

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MonoFlauta responds:

"The drawing style is also very sloppy and the quality of the drawings a very different each picture. At one time we see some pretty good drawn angel-like characters, the next scene is two very badly drawn stick figures moving around in front of a flashing background."

Yes this is because we made small clips and then we added the sound and the clips together so, most of them are different on quality

"You should try to put only drawings in this piece that offer the same quality, or else it looks just too weird."

Well i like it weird haha

Thanks for reviewing!

[CoolJaw: T.T. IIII-V]

Story becomes clearer

YAY, more colours!

It's nice that you introduced some more colours into this piece. And it was even so subtle that I only realized that something was different, but I couldn't really tell what it was. Then I noticed the green colours. :)

The story begins to become clearer now, which is nice. I also learn to distinguish the characters in the story, which also helps a lot to understand what is going on, heh.

However, in the lower right corner there was some overlay from Newgrounds. I guess it is part of the ad system, but it didn't seem to work properly for me. There was an overlay the whole time, reaching a bit into the panel and even covering one word in one panel (luckily, it was only the name "Colin", so nothing too important missed here)..
I don't know if this was just happening for me or if it does happen for others as well, but it might be worth to have a look at the ads system again.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Yeah I need to be more careful with the ad system next time.
Thanks Haggard!

Sincerely,
- Celx

[You can !]

Decent

I think this is a decent flash. The basics are there: A story, some nice drawings, and the animations looked good as well.

But I think you need to work on the pacing a bit more. The beginning and the end scene where a bit too long for my linking.

Sure, the beginning of the flash showing the same thing over and over again is part of the story. But you could try to put some variations in there as well. Maybe cars passing by, the guy with the piece of paper in his hand holding something different, or laying something on the guys desk, etc. .

I felt it progressed too slowly at this point.

The ending scene is a bit too long as well. We can see him in the air for quite some time without him really falling. It seems as if he falls in super slowmotion. I think this could be a bit faster as well.

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Icandraw responds:

thanks :/

[Uzbekistan]

Funny

This flash is quite funny. Fro singing in the menu is really priceless. ^^

The jokes are pretty good and they gave me a good laugh or two. But I think the "laughing scene" where the president and that other guy are laughing is too long. It's funny when they laugh together for some seconds, but that's really enough. No need to drag this scene out for what felt like 5 minutes. >_>

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MonoFlauta responds:

"But I think the "laughing scene" where the president and that other guy are laughing is too long. It's funny when they laugh together for some seconds, but that's really enough. No need to drag this scene out for what felt like 5 minutes. >_>"
Haha i though it was really funny that :p
but well, dont know :p

THanks for reviewing!

[CoolJaw: T.T. II-V]

Good

Really good episode this time. It's quite long so we have a lot to read, which is nice.

There are some issues though that bothered me. The scene where Simon is talking with Bateman on the cell phone and then his partner shows up. The change between the panels is too sudden. Maybe you should put in another panel where his partner shows up and witnesses that Simon wants to sell the pictures, it wouldn't be as irritating this way.

Also there where some spelling mistakes in here. It's always annoying to see those in a submission as they could easily be avoided if you proof read the text (or show it to someone else so they could proof read it).

Anyway, this a very good chapter.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Yeah I should proof read my stuff, since almost all the text is drawn out, I tend to make mistakes more often, and sadly I can't spell check that stuff...

So this kind of review is extremely important for those reasons.
Thanks Haggard!
- Celx