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[KK Nes Vol 02 PaKK Man]

Hmmm

I am really missing one of the funny KK preloaders here. Okay, the submission isn't that big, but I always liked the preloaders very much. ^^

Anyway, the submission is mildly funny. I think it should have been a bit longer and show how pacman is hooked on the morphine, this would have made the submission a lot better.

But I liked how you added the typical pacman sounds, it's always nice to hear those. :)

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PantyWipe responds:

Thank ya!

[Fuck The Lazer!]

Doesn't work too well as a single submission

Yeah, I guess in a collab this would really work better. It could be good for a quick laugh or two there, while as a solo submission I am left with the feeling: "Okay, wtf did I just watch there?"

The idea of the submission is pretty nice and for me the syncing worked quite good.
But you may want to turn up the quality of the music a bit. It's very low and I had some trouble to identify SOAD there for a second or two.

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MonoFlauta responds:

"Yeah, I guess in a collab this would really work better. It could be good for a quick laugh or two there, while as a solo submission I am left with the feeling: "Okay, wtf did I just watch there?"
Yes your are right
"But you may want to turn up the quality of the music a bit. It's very low and I had some trouble to identify SOAD there for a second or two."
Really? however two seconds are not a lot :P haha yeah but needed a better quality

Thanks for reviewing

[CoolJaw: T.T. III-V]

Good storytelling

I like the way you tell the story. You give out some hints and answer some of the questions that you raised in previous chapters.
But even by answering some of the questions you raise even more questions. Very nice way to keep the viewer interested. :)

I think the backgrounds here look very good, they add a lot to the comic.
I still have some problems to identify the characets, though. But that doesn't take away too much of the awesomeness. ^^

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Celx-Requin responds:

I do give alot of hints early on, which is why if you go back the "CoolJaw O.S. III" when Colin is in the bathtub you can see the shrapnel scars on his body.

I feel giving hints and clues early on gives a comic additional value because people can go back and pick up on stuff the second time they didn't pick up on the first time...

One of my favorite films is "green for danger" exactly for this reason.
Sincerely,
- Celx

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 15]

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Wow, I never knew the Libyen flag is just green and nothing else, but I guess you learn something new every day.

The place he stays looks nice, it looks like Leptis Magna (I got that from the article about Libyen on Wikipedia -.-). I couldn't make out what he was holding in his hand, so I'm glad you already explained it to Bahamut that it is a desert glass.

Hopefully the weather isn't too hot, it would be a pity if Hitler couldn't enjoy his stay in Africa because of the weather.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

There didn't seem to be a whole lot going for Libya and the desert glass was about it. I only really picked the place because of the single-coloured flag. ;)

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 14]

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"Hitler was a sensitive man" and he shows so in this flash. He's holding a monkey, comforting it, while he stays in Gibraltar.

Hitler also visits the Rock of Gibraltar. He would've been sorry if he missed out on that opportunity for sure.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Adolf jumped straight over to Ceuta.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 13]

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Hitler as a Matador. I bet the bull had nothing to laugh in this fight, as Hitler is just too strong. I bet he even fought more than one bull at once to demonstrate his strength.

Nice idea with the red rag, Hitler holds it in both hands this time. Usually he only holds things in his left hand in your flashes, so it's nice to see some change here.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The bulls cowered in fear.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 12]

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Hitler in front of the Vasco da Gama bridge is a good idea. I'm also sure he enjoyed his wine.

As I've said earlier, a journy around the world shouldn't be too stressful, so you have to make sure to enjoy some gastronomic specialities while you are traveling around the world.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I believe it was port.

[SpeedE The WFD]

Hmm

The graphics look nice, even though there where some flaws sometimes (at one point the outer line of Stanleys right elbow is missing, for example) but it's nice to look at anyway.
The animations could be a bit more fluent, but they where okay as well.

The voice acting was pretty good, even though the sound quality was a bit low. Also one of the characters that tried to bully Stanley had some static sounds on his voice, propably a bad mic, but it's annoying nevertheless.

As far as the story goes this flash is a bit confusing. Since when has the world's fastest drummer nunchucks?

Anyway, overall it's an okay flash.

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McAfee-Enterprises responds:

Haggard, good points and we hope to correct some of those amateurish mistakes in our next one.......We really need some help in accomplishing many of these awesome suggestions so if you know of anyone up for a challenge please send them SpeedE's way.......

For those that don't know SpeedE started as a character in WFD The Game as seen at Worlds Fastest Gamer

Again thanks for the awesome ideas, input and help wanted for sure (writers, animators etc) in fleshing our little SpeedE! :)

[SHIT! Redux]

Great flash!

A funny little flash. Takes the "shit jokes" to a whole new and actually funny level.

I liked the presentation of the flash. It just was like a real presentation, even though I felt the speaker should have given a quick read out of the warnings we could see at the bottom of the screen at the end of the commercial.

The random appearance of Mario made the flash even funnier, and the "punch line after the punch line", with the kid puking was just the icing on the cake.

Great flash!

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[21 Pains]

Subtitles would be nice

Well, the female voice is pretty hard to understand at times, so it would be nice to have subtitles here for a better understanding.

Most of the jokes are pretty funny, though a little more animation would do the flash pretty good. The characters are just standing there motionless, even when the guy is hit in the back he doesn't even blink, heh.

Also a few more details in the background would be nice. The flash gets pretty boring to look at after about 30 seconds, because you've already seen it all in that time. ^^

And I think a few sound effects would be nice. Gunfire for example. I didn't even know what was happening there until one of the characters mentioned something about shots.

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MonoFlauta responds:

Ok thanks for the reviews
Yeah it looks like the animation was a problem, the sound effects and the guns :P but well thanks for reviewing.