Good idea, but needs some improvements
Well, the idea is pretty good and you had some very funny scenes in here (I especially liked the "kite" scene), others where pretty random (like the "hair" scene). Also the motives of the deaths seemed to repeat themselves quite often. The character blew up serveral times. Sometimes a joke gets funnier the more often it is told or shown, but the "blow up" gag just didn't do it for me in this case.
Some of the graphics where decent while others still need some work. The hairs didn't look that realistic for example. Also the blood didn't look too good most of the time.
Overall it's a decent submission and if you continue to practise then I think you will become a lot better in no time. You have shown that you have talent with this flash, now it's time to develope this talent further. :)
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