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The idea of the game is really nice, but the presentation is lacking some quality.
First of all you have to work on your graphics. Try to draw clean lines. Zooming in will give you a better control of what you are doing. And don't be afraid to draw a line more than once if you aren't happy with the result.
Also experiment with the colors a bit more before you decide which color you want to use for which object. Sometimes the colors of a level really hurt the eyes in this game.
Another negative point are the buttons. Right now only the text is clickable, not the space between the letters. This makes it quite hard to actually click a button sometimes. There are a few very good button tutorials here on NG, which can help you with this task.
The last negative point I have for you is the spelling and the grammar. If you aren't sure how a word is written use a spellchecker for example the one included in "Microsoft Word", or even google can help you out sometimes (the worst spelling error you made was with the word "nuclear". You spelled it "nuecluer" and one sentence later you spelled it "nucuelar". If you had used a spellchecker you could easily have avoided this).
However, as I've already written, I liked the main idea of this game. The story seems to be quite interesting and the controls are very easy and very accurate. Also the musical selection is very nice.
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