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[messpionage]

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This definatly sounds interesting. You used quite a few nice beats and rhythms in here.

However, some of the change overs from one part to another part are a bit too abrupt in my opinion. For example the change over at 0:38. The song starts of pretty quiet and then suddendly *BAM* the bassy sound starts to play.
I think you should work on that a little to get smoother change overs.

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spamwangler responds:

thanks for taking the time to review:)

i agree that smooth changes rather that the quietquietquiet-LOUD!!!!!
sections would make the song alot more smooth and easy to listen to,
but ive always been fond of scary and irritating music
which probably isnt for everyone.

cheers barry

[Solus- She]

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Wow, this sounds almost like it was played by an orchestra (well, if it wasn't for this "sound sample"-like tunes here and there ;) ).

But this song sounds nevertheless very epical and I think this would fit really well into strategic games like Civilization or Age of Empires. The song keeps itself very good in the background, so it wouldn't distract the player from what he is doing, but at the same time it would be a nice tune to listen to while playing.

The melody of this song is very nice and I like listening to this song a lot! :)

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SolusLunes responds:

I'm glad you liked it- I would love to see this put in a flash of some sort. :D

[Wicked Spiral]

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The beat sounds very nice. The bass is great and those percussions really fit into the song. Makes it almost sound like a Drum 'N' Base song ^^.

Unfortuneatly the beat gets repititive quite fast, so it's a good thing you added some voice samples into the song. They sound... well, wicked. Just like the song title promised ^^ and they also keep the song from getting too repititive.

The loop is done perfectly, if it weren't for the progress bar I couldn't tell where the song starts and where it ends!

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CineGoryP responds:

Hmmm... maybe I should change the genre to trance so I don't get beaten over the head with this repetitive stuff :P

I agree that variation would really help... now I just gotta figure out what else to throw in there.

Thanks for the review

[Speedy Bass (Dubstep)]

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I hoped that song would speed up a little bit after the intro, but it doesn't... oh well.

However, a few more changes from the main beat sure would be nice and also add a lot more diversity to it. Especially the first 2 minutes or so are extremly repititive and it gets a bit dull after listening to the beat for such a long time.

So, it's a very good thing that you designed the song far more interesting after those 2 minutes and added a lot of very cool (and sometimes even quite scary) effects to the song.

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Jimbobsthebest responds:

Thanks for the review man, yeah it has become totally clear to me now that I really need to change the beat alot. I think i'm gonna change the bass so that it is at least slightly different in every phrase as well.

It was sort of meant to be a piece which builds, but I think it ended up sounding too repetitive.

Thanks for the review, it is greatly appreciated. James

[+After the Fallout+]

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At first I hoped to get to hear something "Fallout-like" (talking about the PC game "Fallout" here, of course) as the songs there create an awesome post-nuclear war-feeling. I was a bit dissappointed when listening to the track for the first time.

But after listening to this a few times more I get that "post nuclear" feeling you are talking about in your description. All sounds sad and even a bit regretful and I can imagine the musicians sitting in an destroyed building and jamming along a bit.

I think you should try to get a more "destroyed" sound here. Some reverbs would be nice, and in this context even a few dissonant tunes would work. It's after a nuclear war after all, and maybe the instruments are a bit broken, too.

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WritersBlock responds:

Lol, yeah. Thanks for the review. I've kind of got this ruined landscape, and these musicians with clean, polished instruments, in pristine condition, reverb should help.
Cheers.

[Toxic Snake]

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It's a nice melody combined with an awesome deep bass (it nearly blew my speakers away ^^).
But I think it sounds a bit too dull during the song. Some higher notes would give this song a bit more depth I think. Also the abrupt ending doesn't really fit there. Either try to loop the track or simply make the outro a bit longer ;) .

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Assios responds:

Thanks for your review. Glad you liked the bass and the melody. I agree with you on that the ending doesn't fit. You're not the first who said that, so I think I'll change it:)

[p4c-Revenge]

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Nice beat and very diversified.

When the song started I thought at first that this is going to be very repititve. But you added a lot of variations to the song, good work!

I especially like the bassline, it's nice and heavy, just the way a bassline shoudl be ^^.

I don't like the clap-sounds in the song. I think they're just being overused by many audio artists, so I am a little tired of hearing them in songs.

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p4c responds:

true ill have to think of a substitute lol. im jst used to it from so much club music, jst seems natural :D thanks for the review, im glad you liked it, and rawk on!

[Dad 'n Me]

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Great song!

Songs with chainsaws are always great, and this one here is no exception from this rule! ;)

I wish the chainsaw could be heard a bit more throughout the song, though. But the part at 1:50 makes up for that. Great laughing and good use of the chainsaw there.
Awesome song, man!

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DarKsidE555 responds:

Hm, I thought it was better not to hear the chainsaw that much in the song. I guess more than 3 times wouldn't be a benefit for the song. Anyways, glad you enjoyed man! Thanks for da reviewz!

[midnight party]

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I think this track is quite nice, but it's too generic for me. I'm not that much into trance, so it has to be an really kick ass song for me to remember it.

You track is good, but not kick ass. As I've said, it's too generic and predictable for me. Also it lacks varations a bit. Some breaks from the main theme sure would be very nice and would help your song to get better and less gerneric.

Also don't be afraid to experiment with various settings in FL Studio during your songs. Sometimes one can find some really great effects this way.

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aldlv responds:

ok... i will experiment more... =D
& I will try to make a kick ass song next time.. XD
thanx

[RofLmaOmfGtfOrly Mix#79;Blue42]

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"Oh my god what a fitting title for that song!"
That's exactly my thought after listening to this track.

I think you've done a good job here, creating something so crazy, yet so funny. I really can imagine you were still drugged while you made this. I feel a little dizzy right now after listening to the song ^^.

The various parts offer a very good beat and some tunes sound pretty familiar (you used some PacMan music in there, didn't you?).

However, the ending didn't fit in there. It was too big a break from the song... I can't tell exactly why I feel this way... maybe because the background music didn't offer that crazy/happy feeling like the rest of the song did.

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MusicIsBliss responds:

thanks for the reveiw. i am remaking this song at the moment, which is why i requested the reveiws. I want to keep the ending because it took so much work to make gir's voice fit into an actual song, but i know what you mean.

but now that you mention that its not as happy, that makes alot of sense, im gonna try to put what i have in the rest, into the end of the song

thanks for the help