Nice, but needs some work
The bassline is pretty nice and so are the melodies you present in this song. Everything fits together nicely and it's a very relaxing song.
But it needs more power in the middle part and towards the end. The build up is pretty slow, which isn't a bad sing per se, but there isn't happening too much in the song for a pretty long time. At around the 2 minute mark the song picks up a bit, but this doesn't last for too long, unfortunately.
While I'm not too fond of the outro - it kinda just ends there - I appreciate that you tried something different. No hold note, no fade out... just let the song end. Nice in a way, but I still don't like it too much. ^^
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