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There's a lot missing here to be really "creepy" or "hell like", I think.
First of all, those pic scratches don't really fit in there. It sounds as if a squeaky door would be opened. So, either let the scratches out or you should put much more effects on there (a phaser and a chorus should work, I think).
Then, there are just some background noises missing. Some sort of blowing wind, or something similar. Maybe some distand screams, too.
Right now it sounds like a "beta-version" of hell, so build up on what you already have. ;)
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