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[(_RGH_) Aero(on a plane) ".(."]

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The intro is a bit too long in my opinion, but after that (when the plane takes off) the track gets a lot better.

You audialized (is that a word?) the plane crash quite well, but I think you should have added some dissonant tunes in the melody shortly before the plane "crashes", or some little breaks, to simulate some problems with the motor.

The ending is too abrupt, a little fade out or a big crash on a cymbal would have been better here, I think.

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RyeGuyHead responds:

Haggard!

[(_RGH_) Abyss (Dark Pico)]

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I like how you seperated the track in different parts with the description. It was funny reading it and listening to the track at the same time. It created a good atmosphere.

The sound is very good and the mixing is done pretty well. But there's just something missing. Something that makes me wanna listen to this song again and again. A catchy main melody maybe, that varies a bit from part to part.

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RyeGuyHead responds:

I could throw a melody in here, better yet I should just make some lyrics

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend 3]

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Well, the drums are very nice. The double bass is just amazing, and the riff the drum plays is cool, too.

Again, the lyrics get very repititve after a while and the drums totally outpower the guitar. So, it's hard say anything about what the guitar played... but it seems less repititve than in your first song I reviewed.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

Thanks.

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend]

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The lyrics are quite funny, but it gets very repititive after a short time. Also, the guitar could have played something more interesting.

Also, the balancing is a bit annoying. The voice is balanced totally to the right, the music totally to the left. It sounds a bit weird that way. Also also there where some statics when you played the guitar. Either this is because the guitar was too loud and the mic couldn't record it properly or it's because I need new speakers, heh.

Anyway, the song is funny, but too repititve.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

The guitar fit in perfectly with the words..I improvised this after all..And yeah the guitar was recorded at a high volume..So yeah..If you have any EQ ideas then tell me.Because it sounds fine on my 5.1 surround sound speakers.

[Fantasia Nocturne No.1]

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It's a very nice track. I like the deep sound of the piano.

The main part of this song sounds pretty awesome. I like the developement of the melody and the little "solo" parts you threw in there.

The background melody could be a bit more varied, though. It stays the same for nearly the entire track.

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sarias responds:

thanking im glad you liked it as for the backround staying the same, im new to writing for piano, so currently thats all my abillity will allow, plus the fact that my main instrument is piano, im basicly self tought, so maby in the future i will try that but for now its all i can do

[Town Theme Loop]

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A great video game tune! This could either be used as a background song in a town or for a very cheesy cut scene. ^^

But I think this is more fitting as "town music", because it loops perfectly. But maybe it could be a little bit longer, because now it could get annoying very quickly.

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sarias responds:

if you have never noticed, in classic nes and snes rpgs, the length of the song was very short due to restraints, i wrote this to be like a classic rpg track and thus made it short and sweet but im glad you liked it

[.:Sleepless Nights v2:.]

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Even though the song is quite slow paced, the energy that one can feel while listening to this is amazing. Everything just fits perfectly together here. The deep and driving piano, the more high pitched tunes... everything!

I think you created a real masterpiece here!

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GronmonSE responds:

I wouldn't go as far as calling it a masterpiece but I'm really proud of this one :D

Thanks for the review.

[-Stormy Dream- |[Glou]|]

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At first I thought that it was a nice track, but a little too repititve. Gladly, that tune build up later on and you added lots of various melodies to it, keeping the boredom and the repititiveness away. ^^

I think the title doesn't really fit here. The song creates quite a happy atmosphere, only later on when you added the rain sounds I thought of a storm. But before it felt too "happy" to be a storm.

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Gloudas responds:

Strange, I really didn't notice any repetition, but of course I'm biased towards my own stuff. Thanks for the imput and the review :D

[Jxl180 - Run With It]

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I like the melody here, but that deep and bassy sound in the intro doesn't quite fit in here, in my opinion. It sounds as if my speakers where broken... but maybe that's due to my shitty speakers, heh.

Anyway, I think it would be a good idea to change the intro a little bit.

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jxl180 responds:

thanks for your suggestion,
jxl180