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I like the melodies in here and the fast pace of the song. I also like the different parts you put in here. Those are keeping the song from getting too repititve.
Too bad that the main theme is heard so often. You should vary that one bit as it starts to get a bit annoying towards the end of the song.
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Yeah you're right, variation is one of my weak points, but I think i've gotten better since this song
thanks
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The guitar and the beat sound pretty nice. The main problem is that FL always will sound like FL, so that it all songs created with it sound more or less the same. But I think you managed to come up with something different, at least I didn't have the feel that I already knew the song even though I have never listened to it before like I have with many other FL-tracks.
I like how the song slowly builds up. But sadly, there isn't a real climax in here. It seems as if the song is building up the whole time and then it's suddendly over before it really started.
Some sort of main theme would help here, I think.
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yea, i understand tht FL isn't the best program, but its the only thing i got, nd i hafta use wat i have. I kno theres a lack of a climax, but i dnt really have an interest in taking this piece n e further. thnx for the input
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You're right. The song is quite catchy. I like the melodies you used in here. But I think there's still something missing here. It all feels like it is more of an intro to a much longer and larger song than a song on it's own.
Maybe it's the lack of a background beat that makes me feel that way.
However, I like the somewhat comical feel that this track has to offer.
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I Actually get the same feeling this song is actually an intro for a group of songs I made
That I was gonna animate A couple of flashes to like a string of events,but don't worry it
picks up in part 2 thx fore the review :)
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It's a nice song, but I think it's too quiet. You should either play the piano in a more aggressive way or try to turn up the volume of your mic. Because right now many fine nuances of your play just can't be heard because of the low volume.
And I think it's a shame that we can't listen to it properly, because that what I heard sounded great!
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Its good to know you enjoyed it. A quiet feel was sort of what i was going for though. I realize that I probably overdid it though but that is because it was difficult finding the perfect voloumed in which to pick it up. Because while this song is overall quiest it has a part or two where it got a little louder, and you have to make it so that it picks it up, but no so much that there is fuzz or that you can barely hear it. I am not that good with recording and whatnot. I will hopefully fix the low volume issue if and when I re-record it. I am happy that you were still able to see through the low volume and to the aspects of the song and the playing of it. Thank you for review, I really appreciate getting them.
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I like the calm sounds of this track. And you are right with your description. Either you are swimming in the ocean or you're a bird flying across it. But I think there are hundreds of different interpretations and all are as good as those two.
I also like that ancient/asian atmosphere that some of the sounds create, it adds another note to the song.
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Sounds more like this should be in the Video Game genre. And I don't mean this in a insulting way. I like this track BECAUSE it reminds me of classic video game scores. ;)
I like how varied this song is and what I like even more is that one melody is better than the one before.
Great work!
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Thank you very much! I will follow your advice and add it to the video game genre. Then maybe it will get more attention. :D
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The ranting about Jason continues... and I don't think you have developed any further. Neither with the way you play the instruments, nor with the way the vocals are done.
All seems to be very random, there's no real structure present here. The guitar player plays some random riffs on his guitar and the vocalist mumbles some random insults into the mic.
Come back when you know how to write songs.
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I just threw a bunch of shit together : D
Dont judge what you dont know.
By the way.Go fuck your self, faggot.
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I like that song. The guitars and drums go along very well together. Also the guitar plays some very nice tunes.
The problem is that the single riffs that the guitar plays are only connected very loosely with each other, so that it seems as if there's someone who just wants to show off, instead of play a nice song for the audience.
Also, the ending is too abrupt and there is a lot of static noise in there. Either try to edit the noises out or cut off the whole ending and replace it with something else (maybe end the song with another "Paff!").
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This song is all about showing off, hehe :D but thanks for the review!
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Nice 8-bit track. I like the dark atmosphere you create with the deep tunes. Almost like in a old horror game.
Later on you add some very spacey sounds, but I don't think they fit into this piece so well. You should remove them and add some sort of bass line there to underline the dark and sinister atmosphere you created in the intro.
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This would also fit in the video game category. I like how you made use of that bleep sounds. Reminds me of the old 8-bit days, heh.
I think this could be used in a (retro style) game in a chase scene. The track is high paced and creates the right atmosphere for such a scene.
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I thought as much...
Thanks, glad you liked it ^^
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