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[Tomorrow Never Comes]

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It's quite a good attempt, but the problem here is that you don't have a real structure in the song.

Also, sometimes the song sounds too overloaded. There is too much stuff going on at the same time (for example at 0:29).

Overall, it's a nice try, but needs some more work here and there.

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jxl180 responds:

I'll definently check it out.

thank you,
jxl180

[But Who Will Save The City]

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The intro sounds a bit hard in the ears. Those hard beats "feel" really uncomfortable.

After that the song gets a lot better, even though those artificial guitar sounds a bit strange here. But on the other hand it creates some kind of a "robotic" atmosphere, which fits really well together with the title of the song. I had some kind of Cyberpunk city in mind after listening to the song a few times.

The ending works quite well. At first I thought you wouldn't be able to end the song in a good way when I saw that there were only a few seconds left and the beat was still going strong. But you ended it in an uncompromisingly way, which also fits well into the Cyberpunk theme I had in mind while listening to the song.

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SymbolCymbal responds:

hey thanks for the review... just think of a super hero intro to a cartoon really fast paced and many different camera angles and scene flashing in front of ya....that was the inspiration to the song.
yeah the begining is a lil stressfull.
the 'guitar you heard is just razor bass style with some distortion and reverb.. i guess maybe it does sound like a digital guitar lol.
thanks for the review i always apreciate your input man.

[Colossus.Ambiance]

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I like how this song develops. From a few chords being played in the intro to a very nice song with amazing melodies.

I especially like the background melody later in the track. It almost sounds Matrix-like.

Also the mixing is done very good. We can hear every single note during every second of the song. Good job!

Only downside is that the song doesn't offer that much diversity. It would be nice if you could add a few more parts to it. It would also result in the song being a bit longer, which would also be a good thing.

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Flash-MX responds:

Thanks for the review!
This is pretty much what I wanted to accomplish, was stack several layers of colors over time and then have it go on for a while, I do admit after hearing it over and over it IS pretty repetitive, so I'll defenitely change style with that next time,

Thanks again!

[Invasion 2.0 - Mjattie (NG)]

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A great track. The mixing is done perfectly. No outpowering of melodies or instruments here.

I like how you put in some calmer parts here and there. This keeps the song from getting repititve and creates a very nice contrast with the "not so calm" parts.

The drums sound a bit too artificial, though, but I guess that's the price one has to pay for using FL Studio and similair programs. :/

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mjattie responds:

I guess... But yea... It's the best I can get

[Boring Instrumental]

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Not boring at all! It is a good song, but it's in need of some vocals the way it is now.

There are some pauses in there, where the instruments only play very little and very quiet. Wouldn't be a problem if you had vocals in here, but without vocals it leaves something to be desired.
So, either add vocals or try to shorten those quieter passages.

Also, the drums should start a bit earlier in the intro. When the guitar plays that riff the 4th time, the drums should already start with the snare drum.

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BreakingFaces responds:

thanks you

[It's Finally Coming]

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This sounds interesting and a bit strange from time to time.

The main problem I have with this track is, that I couldn't find any sort of main theme.
Well, you DO have some sort of main melody in here, but it is buried beneath a whole lot of noise, it seems.
If you could cut down on those noisy effects a bit the song will greatly improve in my opinion.

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MusicIsBliss responds:

ya, i guess i really spent a majority of the time fuckin round with effects, and no time actually making the structure of the song, will have to work on that

[Simply Childhood ( teaser )]

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The song builds up pretty nicely. I like how you add more and more to the song the longer it plays.
But the build up may be a bit too long. Nothing really happens in the song except for the build up. The melodies stay the same throughout the track.
Also, that last part you added (at around 1:05) doesn't really fit to the rest of the song.

Also, the loop coud be a bit better. Let the drums end a few seconds before the song loops over.

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[§-Love at First Site-§]

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A happy and cheerful song. Maybe a bit too unoriginal from time to time, but nevertheless a nice song. ;)

Anyway, that clapping sound you used is a bit annoying, as nearly every techno submission offers exact the same clapping sound... maybe you can change it to something different? ;)

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SinZLazTWordZ responds:

Actually i did and i also had it mastered by one of my friends =] If you want go to my profile and look for ... well its most recent submission §-LAFS RemiX-§ It has a different clap... better work ups... Pretty much just improved and also the sounds were switched up.. Thanks for the review!!!

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[§-Save Me-§]

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I like the slow pace of the song. I also like how you slowly build up the main beat during the intro. At first all we can hear is some hissing sound and then it gets more and more clear and suddendly you present us this nice melody.

Only thing that isn't so good is the ending. The song just stops on the last note. I was hoping for something smoother here (maybe a fade out).

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SinZLazTWordZ responds:

Yeah... im still new to techno and all.... but im working on it and getting better progressing myself.. Hopefully il be releasing some new stuff soon. Sort of a "writers" block. Cant seem to come up with anything much. But thanks for the review and il be sure to fade out or have a more dramatic ending =]

~§in§

[(_RGH_) High(Way)]

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I like the piano intro very much. But I think the guitars need to be a lot louder. Even right after the calm piano intro the guitar was too quiet to compete against the piano.

Other than that, the song is great. And I don't think it needs any lyrics. Just louder guitars. :D

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RyeGuyHead responds:

I can crank them