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Ok, this was random, all right. But what's the matter with the sound? Waay too much static in there, as if you held the mic only a few inches aways from your mouth. Turn down the volume of the mic and don't hold it so close to your mouth when recording voices. That way you won't have that much static in there.
The graphics were part of the concept, I guess but I have to say that I didn't like the concet that much ;) . Try putting more effort into your drawings and experiment a bit with different drawings tools to find out which suits your needs best.
Also zooming in might help to get better results when creating graphics.
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