Haggard's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario Short#1]

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You made good use of the sprites. I think sprite moveis are quite hard to do, but you did a good job in cutting them out as well as in manupilating them.

The fighting scene could have used a little more work. The fighting moves didn't look that good and that the "beaten" Koopas just lay there wasn't a good idea. You should have painted a little 'X' in their eyes so that the viewer would instantly know that they are dead/knocked out/whatever.

Also the story isn't made clear in the flash. I read some of your responses so now I know that it was supposed to be a birthday party for Mario. But I didn't knew this after watching the flash. So a few more words and scenes on that subject would've been nice.

The music you used fit well in the flash, so no need to change that :P .

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[Sonic: The Crybaby]

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You made good use of the sprites, manupilating them in a very good and funny way.
The story was a bit short and quite random, but it was really funny. Never knew that sonic was such a crybaby :D .

The sounds you used in this flash are quite good, but you should try to bring them all to the same volume, as some sounds were much louder than other sounds in this flash.

Adding subtitles is a good idea, but I think some voice acting would be great, too (along with the subtitles). Also, some lip syncing to indicate which one of the characters is speaking is a good thing. This way you won't have to bother to indicate via small pictures who's speaking.

It's a great first flash, so keep up the good work!

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The-Red-Jack responds:

Another positive review! Thanks :D

[Christmas In Jimtopia]

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Heh, the plot was very original and the ending really unexpected. It gave me a good laugh ;) .

I think the graphics are good, even though the characters may need a little bit more work, though. I liked how detailed you backgrounds are, everything looks very clear and it really fit into the setting.

The music was ok, too. I don't like that kind of music, but it fit good into your flash.

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Jimtopia responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the review.

[SAATANA]

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Wow, that's what I call "random" :D . A random setting, a random plot, random characters...
But somehow this turns out to be pretty good. I think a lot of meanings could be interpreted into this flash and all were right and wrong at the same time.

The graphics are really outstanding, as you cared a lot about the details. All the backgrounds look very nice and the colouring and outlining you choose for the background objects add to the weirdness of this flash.

The animatios are awesome, too. Very fluent and very smooth.

Also, the music fits very well into this flash.

All in all this flash is great, but it's just TOO random for me. That's why you only get 9 out of 10 from me ;).

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Catoblepas responds:

Thanks for the review, boi.