Haggard's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Narrative Flash Remake]

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The presentation of the poems is nice, but it's something to get used to, as it is a bit confusing at first.

The choice of audio was great and the music fitted the poems very well. You should have compressed the songs a bit more though, to reduce the file size and the loading time.

I noticed that "The Crime" and "The Forsaken Child" are the same poems, only with different music. Was that intentional?

Also, you should have made the link to your site in the preloader clickable. That way the viewer doesn't have to type in the adress manually.

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SprintT responds:

Now I feel silly! That was not intentional, and probably happened when I reloaded to fix another issue. I will get the changed here ASAP! Also thankyou.

[Do I eat the...? STWPT]

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Short, but funny. The song is good for a quick laugh, the graphics look very good and it fits perfectly to the song. The sounds in here are fitting, too. Overall, the flash has a very comical feeling to it.

Too bad that the collab has died, though. I'd really like to see it. ^^

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Lazyfeet responds:

Yeah, a lot of people want to see the collab. It was the '10 second collab.' Shame really. Thank you v much for the review ;)

[The Last Hour: Chapter 5]

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Now you are finally getting somewhere! You improved A LOT since the last chapter.
The graphics look much better here. They are still a bit sloppy, but better than on your previous chapters. If you continue at this rate with your improvements, you'll be one of the top artists on newgrounds in no time. ;)

I liked that you cut down on introduction lenght. I think it was the first time the acutal episode was longer than the introduction.
I also liked the skip button you added there. That way we can jump straight into the action.

Also, you managed to produce a much better voice acting here than in chapter 5. Nearly no statics could be heard now. Great!
Still I'd say you should keep looking for different voice actors for your different characters.

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Jaiba responds:

check out chapter 10. it will more than make up for the quality of this movie.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202
plus i've listened to all of yalls reviews

[The Last Hour: Chapter 4]

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You are still improving, but you still have quite a long way to go.

First of all, you should try to find some voice actors (I'm sure some people in the audio forums will gladly help you out).
The sound of your voice is all right, but either you need a better mic or you should put the mic farther away from your mouth. Sometimes the breathing is just too heavy on letters like 'p'. Also your accentuation is quite strange, which makes it a bit hard to follow what you are saying.

It's a good thing that you turned the volume of the music down as it was very annoying in the last chapters that the music was so loud all the time. I still think it would be better if you stop the music once the introduction is over.

Speaking of the introduction: It's too long. You advertise the previous chapters of the series. Now that is fine, but I don't want to sit through all of this if I already watched (and reviewed) them.
It would be better if you'd create a simple menu, where you put in different options like "introduction", "previous chapters", etc. .
That way we could start watching the movie right away.

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Jaiba responds:

i think you will enjoy my newest movie. check out chapter 10. it will more than make up for the quality of this movie.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /457202

[Landscape]

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It's a great picture. I like the sun the most. The lightening there is almost perfect.

There's some snow missing on top of the mountain in the background, though. :P

Oh, and that little of white on the left side of the picture should be removed, too. ^^

Happy (belated) Clock Day. ;)

Auz responds:

Thanks for your review Haggard. And thanks for your compliments about the sun, I thought that was the best part of the picture too. I also noticed that thin white line on the left side. Unfortunaley I can't edit it right now since I don't have flash anymore, so I'll just have to leave that as it is.

Happy belated clockday to you as well :p

[like a duck (colour)]

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It's a good flash movie with a funny song and some very good graphics.

Too bad that the music is slightly asynchron at times. But most of the time it seems to be all right.

Sometimes I felt a little bit reminded of Monthy Python. First off all because of the randomness of some parts, and second because of the scenes where one figure opened it's mouth and out came another figure, which opened it's mouth... etc. .

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TheBoogley responds:

Monty Python! Cheers for the comparison! :D

[.::Imagine::.]

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It's a pretty nice flash. The animations are very fluent and the transitions are done great. Everything flows really nicely together.
I also liked how well the animations where synced with the music.

The drawings are pretty good overall, but I think a little more work here and there still is needed (for example the humans looked a little strange in this flash).

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