\m/
A great piano track. You manage to create a very dense atmosphere with just one single instrument. I don't think you need any other instruments here, it's fine as it is now.
The poem in the author comments fit very well to the track, so obviously it did a good job inspireing you. ;)
{ Review Request Club }
Aye, I liked the poem, and the main part of the melody came to me during a flight. Fancy that.
\m/
The mix of genres sure is interesting. But from time to time there's just too much going on at the same time, so that I can't concentrate on everything at once. Also because of that, sometimes it's pretty hard to make out the single instruments because all seem to play at full volume and competing each other instead of playing together.
Most noteably is it when the solo sets in. You should tune down the volume of the other instruments a bit, so that we can clearly hear and enjoy the pretty good solo.
{ Review Request Club }
Mixing has always been something that's plagued me, and it's something I intend to continue working on.
Thanks for the insight :D
\m/
The bass in this track is amazing. But sadly this track lacks some melodies. The first two minutes or so there's absolutely no melody, just the kicks. This gets boring pretty quickly.
When finally the melody sets in it isn't diversified enough to keep me interested in the song.
The track is over 5 minutes long, but it isn't happening enough to justify this length.
{ Review Request Club }
\m/
Better than the first part. Doesn't sound as messy and it loops better (a little static sound can be heard when the loop starts over, but I'm not sure if it's in the original track or if go in there somwhere between uploading it to NG and me listening to it).
It's still a bit too short and lacks varity a lot.
{ Review Request Club }
~T_T
\m/
The beginning sounded very promising, but at around 0:13 it gets way too messy. There is too much going on at once so it's quite hard to make out the melodies.
Also, the song is too short in my opinion and it doesn't loop. Try to expand the song a bit by making the parts a bit longer. Also try to get the mixing done a bit better.
{ Review Request Club }
false, yo r a cupkake.
\m/
The good thing is that it loops very well.
The bad thing is that it doesn't do that much else. Just a few beeping sounds with A LOT of static noises.
So, first of all, get rid of the static noises. Then, add more content to it. Like some drums and some melodies...
{ Review Request Club }
\m/
Sounds too generic for me. And I have a dislike for exactly that kind of female vocals that you used here. ^^
The song itself is also quite generic, a few breaks here and there from the main beat would be really helpful. Also, the ending seems to be cut off. The last note doesn't appear to be played fully and the song already starts over. A few more seconds at the end should help here. ;)
{ Review Request Club }
Yeah, I like theese kind of vocal samples^^
Generic, sure. Anyways, a main beat break is a good idea. it would fit to make it less repitive.
The ending tune was just something i made in the end :P
\m/
Voice samples can either go completly wrong or work out just fine. In this track, they work out just fine. I don't think I would like the song as much without the voices.
I think you created a quite original techno song here. I was really glad that you didn't use a clap sound in the intro (clap sounds are overused imo).
I was disappointed when I heard a clapping sound later on... but then discovered that it was the snare drum. ^^
So, maybe you should change the sound of the snare drum a bit, so that it sounds a bit more like "snare" and a bit less like "clap". XD
{ Review Request Club }
\m/
I started listening to this without reading the description or looking at the genre of the track. I instantly thought that this was a video game track. Well, I wasn't totally wrong with that as this was in fact inspired by video game-ish sounds.
It sounds indeed very much like the good old 8bit music we all enjoyed on the NES and other 8bit machines. Only the clapping sound is a bit annoying. It just seems to be overused in too many tracks. Maybe you can change it to a different sound. I think it would help the song to get even better.
{ Review Request Club }
hmm...i can kinda see where ur coming from
but i really dnt kno wat other sounds wud sound ok
thnx for the input
There are 10 types of people. Those that understand hexadecimal and F other people.
Age 43, Male
Software Developer
Buchholz, GER
Joined on 12/25/01
Solus- Cast Off 