Good work, with a slight drawback
Pretty good voice acting again. I like your low-key tone of voice, it fits to the mood of this poem.
However, I think sometimes you could pronounce the words more clearly. Sometimes (especially during the middle of the poem) it seems to me that you pronounce some of the syllables (or single characters) not clearly enough, which does sound a bit like mumbling.
I may be wrong here and only I hear this "mumbling", but with voice acting it is very important to kind of "overpronounce" the words. A bit like as when you are singing. There are certain phonemes that don't carry too well (like a "t" at the end of a word for example, it's very easy to "swallow" the sound of a "t" at the end of a word, especially when you are singing), so it is very important to pronounce those very clearly.
It may be a bit unusual to do that at first, because in every day speech you wouldn't to this (and don't need to do this as you will be understood either way most of the time), but as I said: For voice acting it is very important to have a very clear and very "clean" pronouncation.
Anyway, I still like your work as a voice actor, but there's always room for improvement. :)
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