Haggard's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Freaky Food]

Nice background

I really like the background here, it adds a whole new level to the picture. Also the source of light coming from the front is a good choice because now we can start imagine why both fruits are so scared. Maybe they are watching a horror movie and are scared because of what's happening on screen? Or they surprised some burglar that is shining with his flash light.

Anyway, this picture is really nice.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

thanks haggard :D

[No More Running]

Good

As a cover this picture works really well. I like the action we can see on this picture, even though it's (obviously) just a still frame.
But the colours would work on a cover as well. Ok, maybe it would be a tad bit TOO dark on a book cover, but I like book covers that aren't overloaded with various characters or huge letters best.

The character design is good, too. The propotions are realistic and the clothing fits quite well.
Only thing I would change is the ear. Like Coop already suggested, I would hide it (at least partially) behind the hair.

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[Willburt]

Grey

Well, the 3D looks quite good here, but as others have stated, everything looks so "plastic like". Maybe it's just because nearly everything is so grey in this picture; the background, the suit he's wearing, the hair... only different colour we can see are his shoes, his tie and his skin. Colour up your life, man! ;)

Also as others have stated already, the lightning is really off. It DOES look like that guy has wet himself. Oh well, maybe he saw something that really scared him so it was just some kind of... natural reaction.

The trouses do look a bit strange though. What's with the trouser legs? Are they rolled up, or something? And why is the shoe on the left white on top (or is that a sock?) while the shoe on the left is black on top (or isn't that a shoe, but a boot? If so, why doesn't he wear a boot on the other foot?).

Last thing I can complain about is that the character is off center so much. His right hand reaches out of the canvas, which does look a bit strange.

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PlusPlusKid responds:

yes it is a sock and they are rolled up, also i think hes just bad at putting pants on

[Sexy Handsome Veggies]

Good pic

The idea to add faces to vegetables is not new, but I still like your take on it. I especially like the background you added to this picture. At first I was thinking that we can see a washing machine in the background but you said it's from inside your fridge, which is an even better idea.

I also like the details you added to the single vegetables. It's not that easy to spot in the small version, but when the picture is viewed in full size all the details are visible.

Very nice picture!

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Merol responds:

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
And thanks for your review!!!
(don't know what else to say)

[Heart of Autumn]

Great!

A very good painting! I really like this.
The colours are chosen very well and I like how you used them. The bottom of the picture is dominated by a red colouring, in the left side has mostly green in it, while the right and the middle are mostly yellow(ish).
This looks very good to me and creates a very nice scenery.

I also like the reflection on the water, but I think you should've tried to work some "waves" or some "movement" into the water. A pond as smooth as glass is a very rare sight and it makes it a bit harder to notice that there is a pond in the middle of the painting.

Anyway, this is about the only downside I could find here. Great painting! :)

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[Mr. Buisness man]

Good character

I like the colouring/shading on the character. It adds a lot to the picture and it looks pretty good this way. Much better as if you had left out the shading here.

The walking cycle is done pretty good as well. Maybe the character swings his arms around too much, but I guess the Business man has his reason to walk like this.

I think the face needs some more work, especially the chin area. It doesn't look too clean worked out and it takes away a bit from the quality of the character.

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StalkerGuy responds:

Yeah, I understand, I'm not that great with making faces. Thanks for the review!

[Phoenix /SN/]

Looks good

I like this picture. You can interpret pretty much everything into it, I can see various shapes and forms in it (ranging from a simple explosion to a bird) and all shapes I can see in this picture make perfect sense in the context of the collurs you chose for this picture.

This image would be great as a desktop background, if it wasn't for the text on it. Okay, it's your picture, so of course you want to put your name on it, I understand that. But I think it kind of disturbs the atmosphere of the picture.

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[The Sugar Claws Cover]

Different from your other art

Well, this looks very different from your other art you have uploaded so far.

It works pretty good as a cover. On the one hand we have very bright pink colours that look very "girly" and on the other hand the character on the cover looks quite "weird", which builds a very good contrast to the pink colouring.

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Celx-Requin responds:

Yup the comic is going to deal with different issues than Cooljaw, and the colors and style are going to change to reflect that.

I'm hoping to have the first chapter out in a few week.
Thanks for the review!
- Celx

[Lay off the coke, Garfield!]

It's a start

Well, it's obvious that this picture needs a lot of work, but it is a start. I think you can use this picture to work out all the major and minor flaws and then redraw it on a new canvas.

First of all, this piece looks too sketchy right now. The lines don't look too clear and on the first glance the picture looks too messy.

But I like that you took the time to draw a little background, even though the door on the right side looks a bit too small.

You drew Garfield's face pretty good, but his body should be a bit fatter (his stomach looks too thin ^^). But on the other hand, maybe he looks so "thin" right now because all he does now is coke?

Overall, I like the idea of this pic and the joke is actually quite good. You just need to work a bit more on this piece.

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[Gay adventures at youtube]

Wait what?

To be honest, I couldn't follow the story line of this comic, so either you should try to work it out a bit better, or I am simply too dumb to get it. XD

Assuming I'm not too dumb, I say you should try to draw some more panels, so the story would become clearer to the reader.

The drawings are actually very decent but I think the comic could use some colours, this would make them even better.
Also the colour would help to "understand" the drawings a bit better. Sometimes I had to have a second look at a panel to get what you drew there.

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