Good
The intro sounds a bit muffled at first, but it gets better after a few seconds.
I like that you put in various parts with various melodies. This keeps the song from getting too repititive.
Sometimes all that can be heard is the background beat. I guess it should function as some kind of connection between the parts, but for me it doesn't quite work out. Maybe if you changed the "connection beat" a bit it would work better. Maybe all that is missing is just a hi-hat there.
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