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[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 6]

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Funny and short. Very nice flash.

The characters look a bit odd, but at least you have your own style for the characters. Not overused stick figures or some sort of locks/clocks/whatever.

The voice acting is done great. The voices are easy to understand, even without subtitles.
The story was short and funny and the ending gave me a good laugh! :)

I found one flaw in your flash: The "Play" button was only clickable on the text, not on the spaces in between the letters. Maybe you can change that to a "real" button to make your flash even better. ;)

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Jimtopia responds:

Thank you, and I'll be sure to fix the Play button for the next one!

[LL - Wir sind Legion I]

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This was a very nice flash. You made good use of Speakonia here and the subtitles are very helpful for understanding what was said, too.

I liked the story. That "flash within a flash" idea is very interesting. That little advertisement during the middle of the flash was funny, too.

However, you should change the title to "Wir sind Legionen", as "wir sind legion" isn't correct. "wir sind" needs the plural of "Legion" which is "Legionen".
So yeah, change the title. ;)

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Rn86 responds:

but in english it's "we are legion" too, I don't see the problem.
thx for the review anyway

[Movement1 - chippy]

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I like those kind of experiments, I think I have to do something like this myself sometimes... ^^

I thinl the end is a bit too fast, even at only 8 FPS. While you where cycling the surroundings didn't change that fast, so you have a very nice flow in the pictures, but at the end it's too fast, because the surroundings change pretty often, so the eye/the brain can't catch everyhing that can be seen on the photo...

I liked the music you included to the flash. That gives us something nice to listen to while watching the pictures fly by. :)

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Bezman responds:

I give your 2nd paragraph 9/10.

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

I'll have to plan #4 better.

[Wegra Adventure 2]

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The speakonia voice here seems to be a bit slower than in part 1, but it's still a bit hard to understand.
Because of that I really don't know what was going on here. Part 1 had something to do with ice cream, but here? Shadow ate a sandwich that actually belonged to Wegra? After that, I'm completly lost.

The graphics seem to be a bit worse than in the previous part, because in this part you had often overlapping graphics, for example the picture where you show Stewie and Brian. The text is partly overlapped by the picture. Those kind of mistakes can be easily avoided and are quite annoying.

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Wegra responds:

The story here is that I had a weird dream one night and Decided to animate it. Looking at It now I should've put it at the end where I wake up.

[Wegra Adventures]

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The fast speakonia voice ruined this for me, as it is really hard to understand. Maybe you should slow it down a bit or try to record the fast narration yourself with a mic.

The pictures also went by very fast, but I guess that's just what you wanted. And fast flashes can be very funny. Yours was only mildly funny because I had problems understanding the voice, as I've already mentioned.
The graphics of the pictures are quite poor, but all in all they are okay. The flash wouldn't be funnier with superb graphics.

You shouldn't loop this flash. I was halfway through the text at the end when the flash started again. Put a replay button at the end, so that the viewer can decide for himself if he wants to see the flash again.

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Wegra responds:

Yeah, I never figured out how to put in a replay button. Heck I can't even get the damn movie to play!

[Why wasn't this BLAMMED]

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This wasn't blammed because it actually can make people laugh. Maybe only for a short second, but it can make people laugh nevertheless.

Heil responds:

okay then, silly people