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    This may have been a good parody of the AYB-flash, which itself isn't that great to begin with, but it started a craze like not much flashes can do.

    Right at the beginning is the first minor flaw I noticed. The "Start"-button is only clickable on the text, not on the spaces in between. There are good button tutorials on NG, so you should check them out.

    The drawings here are quite poor, it may have been better if you just used the original intro for that. Or put some more effort into your drawings.

    The sound quality was very poor. It sounds as if you played the song on your PC and recorded it at the same time with a mic. You also just used the original AYB-song instead of putting some effort into this flash and dub it (ie exchange all the "base" in the song with "leet").

    The pictures are quite nice, but most of them are way too small, so that I wondered why the flash needed such a big screen if there's nothing as big in the flash?
    So, try to enlarge the pics next time.

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    Sispri responds:

    Eh, ok. No there won't be a next time though.

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    Though both contributions are very short I enjoyed them very much! You both managed to get your message through in this short time, so I guess you've done everything right on "story" aspects here.

    I enjoyed Little-Rena's part a bit more, because it focused a bit more on Ross I think. The letter he left was nice to read (even though it could have been displayed a tad bit longer. I couldn't hardly finish reading it) and the fact that he wishes that his replacement is a little worse than him put a smile on my face.

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    Little-Renastair responds:

    I think I remember displaying the letter for as long as it took me to read it, I'm often a slow reader so I thought it would be okay, but yeah sorry. I wanted to make the letter funny in a subtle way like that.

    Thanks for the review :)

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    I don't know much about Naruto as I don't watch that show, so I can't tell how good your flash was compared to the anime. But I think you've done a very good job here.
    The fight was quite interesting and you used some very nice effects here and there (like the explosions or when the fighters where "powering up").

    Sometimes the font you chose was quite hard to read, so maybe you should use some different colours for the letters.
    Also you should spellcheck the subtitles before you submit the flash. I noticed that nasty little "your"/"you're" spelling error once. It's very annoying to read "your" when you really mean "you're", as it can be so easily avoided...

    The idea with the three different endings is a very good one, even though the endings where quite short. It's also a very good idea that you only jumped back to the "choice screen" when one presses the replay button. Otherwise it would be very boring to sit through the whole fight again, just to see a different ending.

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    mortis5000 responds:

    Thank You for the review...

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    Well, I liked the bottom right turret best, because it seems to have more details than the other guns.

    The top gun has an annoying pixel error on the left hand side, so that it looks like the left side is always "moving". The bottom left gun looked quite ugly when it showed it's front to the viewer because suddendly all the barrels just dissappeared, leaving some kind of a "blank spot" there.

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