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The melody you played on the guitar sure sounds like blues, heh. But I think the quality of the sound isn't that great. The drums sound all right, but the guitar sounds very much overamplified... turn down on that distortion a bit to get a cleaner sound.
The loop doesn't work that well, you can hear a gap between the end end the start, you should try to fix that.
Overall, it's not a bad submission, just a little too short. But I think that you have the talent to create some very good songs.
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