That was fast...
Good that you put the lyrics in the comments or else I wouldn't have understood a thing here.
The background beat could use some more melodies. Right now it seems as if it is just there so that you have something in the background, which is a bit of a let down for the song.
The rapping was nice and even though you rapped very fast all the words have been pronounced pretty clear, so... good job there. :)
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