First off let me say that this is way better than anything else I have ever written.
This sounds pretty good at times, but pretty strange at other times as well. I don't know if it's just me, but the timing sounds off throughout the whole song. It sounds as if the timing is delayed every now and then. But maybe it's just because you chose an unusual beat to write this song in.
Also, the acoustic guitar doesn't sound too good here. I guess it's pretty hard to record it in a good way (and I have heard other recordings with a similar sound), but exactly this "sound issue" is one of the reason why I don't like the acoustic guitar too much (the other reason is, that I'm just not very good at playing it ;) ).
Another thing I didn't like too much is the small interludes. They just sound too different from what we heard so far and don't really fit into the song.
Anyway, I'm not trying to dis this song. See above: It's way better than anything I have ever written. It's just that I think it could be better.
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